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for I, Snape

by Avrild

person Talene
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo wonderful! I love how youare protraying them both!! Please continue to write! I can\'t seem to get enough of this story! It is so full of humor as well! Hats off to you!!
person Tegan
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like your interpretation of Hermione Granger. She\'s intelligent, confident, and has a twisted sense of humor. I think it\'s similar to what she might turn out like in the books. (Especially if the books were NC-17--*smile*)

Excellent work!

--Tegan
person Janet
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve never bothered to review anyone\'s stories before, but this one was just so good I had say something. The images of Snape as a cat (particularly a cat who gets it on with Mrs. Norris) are absolutely priceless! Thehor hor definitely understands cats and their behaviour very well. I can\'t wait to see where this story is going to go!
person Elizabeth Stump
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! They finally had sex! Boo hoo, Snape thinks he\'s dead. Poor Hermione, but hey, she got three great orgasms out of it. Can\'t wait to see what happens when Snape finally realizes he\'s not dead and he shagged a willing Hermione. I like seeing the sweet tender affectionate lover Snape - and thank God it\'s was potion induced. I don\'t think I could stomach an OOC Snape that was that sweet without something to cause him to act that way. Keep the snarky Snape, but seeing him be a wonderful lover like that was great, too. When they do get around to realizing they love one another, I want to see tender sex god Snape return.

I\'m waiting with baited breath for the morning after scene. Will he rage against her, call her names, physically throw her out of his rooms? Will Hermione try and seduce him once she realized she can\'t get enough of Snape? Thanks against for posting another chapter so quickly.
person nesscafe
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy! What a chapter! I do not want to be Hermione when Snape comes back to himself! He\'s gonna freak out when he realizes he had sex w/ her! And how is she going to feel when Snape is back to normal? I have to say your smut writing abilities are incredible! I look forward to the next installment! Hope it\'s soon!
person amethyst
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. Each chapter you write leaves me wtih anxious anticipation of the next.
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I\'m in shock (a good thing, indeed). He thought she was Lily... and she\'s jealous of her?
I would have done the same she did... not going to waste an opportunity like that! For how long he will be in that state of mind? How would he react when he realize what he did? I need to know... so please... update soon!
person k.h.
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YYYYYEEEEEEEESSSSS!!!!!!halelujah!(I\'m having deja-vu of an herbal essence commercial!) One question: Snape is going to be royally pissed when this wears off, isn\'t he??? Oh no! Poor hermione! (chants) More chapters..more chapters..more chapters. Okay, okay I\'ll get off the soapbox now!
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve got two very different reactions to this chapter. LOL


eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ::a scream of pure delight can be heard echoing through cyberspace:: I am *so* glad you did that between Albus and Althea!!! From they bey beginning of this, well, since the first private interaction between those two I\'ve hoped you\'d head this direction. ::giggles:: Of course, I\'d have enjoyed it regardless, the story is wonderful. I *ct* wt* wait to see Severus\' reaction to those two . . . once he\'s back on an even keel, that is.

And that brings me to my second reaction.

OMG!!!! That scene was so completely bittersweet and agonizing. It pulled so many reactions out of me, many of them completely contradictory. I, quite literally, *ache* for Severus. When he comes out of the euphoria, he is, among other things, going to be utterly devastated. Hermione, allowing him to experience what he desired most, well, that was simply incredible.

Of course, there\'s this little voice inside me, saying things like she took advantage of him since she knew what was going on, and he had absolutely no clue.

That aspect, I\'d imagine, will cause some major probs . . . that is, of course, assuming he realizes what happened in reality as a mirror for what he *thought* was happening. ::sighs::

LOL, As I said, conflicting responses.

Well done. It\'s been a long while since I\'ve read anything that pulled me in so many directions at once from a single scene. I\'m on the edge of my seat waiting to see what consequences you weave from this chapter.

Kiri -- devoted fan.
person JustMe
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You have to update this really soon or I will be on pins and needles until you do! Yum!