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Althea saying \"You are the king\"... me me bust a gut. I suppose it has to do with a memory of a movie or something where the bored house wife is saying in bored nasal tones as her husband humps her \"Oh, God you\'re good. You are the king.\"

Interesting that Snape realizes he wants Hermione enough to drown himself if he can\'t have her, though he just disparaged Mudbloods, raved about the Dark Lord\'s original plan to \"level the playing field\" then let Hermione shag him after she saves him. Interesting how he goes from despising her to not wanting to live without her. I hope you go into more detail into his line of thinking as it seems a bit abrubt. Since I expect a Snape inner mologue next chapter (as you seem to alternate), I hope to know why he has gone from ridicule and loathing her to needing her so quickly.

I love the fact that you have Hermioake ake off her rose colored glasses and sees Snape for the twit he can be at times. That was different, as usually she falls for him and then sees him as perfectly flawed. I can\'t blame other fics for doing, I did it with a Challenge I wrote (but I pounded that out ASAP and didn\'t have time/drive to do as much in depth work as you have done). But for the fact she lusts after him, shags him and then sees him in a less than flattering light was an interest twist. It would be interested in him clinging to her and she feels like he\'s clinging to her and she wants space. Now THAT would be a twist. Hmm, sounds like challenge material.

Wow! That Snape is something else! You want to hate him, but he\'s so helpless that you just can\'t! He so needs her to rescue him from himself! Bless his heart! That was so sad where it sad he didn\'t want his life so she could have it! Oh I wanted to cry! What great writing! Update again! SOON!!! PLEASE!!!

Great fic! In fact, I have admired all your fics. Looking forward to more!

Another great chapter! Yeah!
I like Hermione taking control of the situation. Whether it\'s because she is thinking of her needs or she wants to help him... it\'s not important... she can\'t leave a suicidal man thinking alone... she needs to drag him around and make him want to live.

And I love the way you express his thoughts!

Keep writing... and update soon!

This is going to be an interesting fiction. I\'ve only read the first chapter and I wish I knew why Hermione had turned him into a cat. Hopefully that will come up. That was also a very clear, depictive way of describing Snape\'s turn from Voldemort to Dumbledore. You put that into a great perspee.
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~Lara

Damn I love this story! I get a harduckluckle almost every time! Love it! Love it! Love it! I especially admire you for using the Hermione dominance angle which I love but hardly ever see! The fact that he views her as taking sexual advantage of him is so fabulous! Way to go Mione\'! If she were a real person I\'d buy her a beer for being a stud! Woo hoo!!!

This was another great chapter!

great story, if you get a moment could you please let me know when you update? thankies! Hee hee hee.. the fact snape wanted to stay a cat.. *evil chuckles* He\'s sure getting around this story isn\'t he? Even kit kitties aren\'t safe! LOOOL

Poor sweet innocent virginal Snape is taen advantage of by that nasty Gryffindor. Poor man. How will he cope? Very very funny.

Bravo! Snape is just a man, a horny as hell man with stamina to boot. Man, *I* want to shag him senseless. I love the fact the Hermione is such a wanton little vixen.
Oh, I do hope Hermione intends on seducing him a lot more in upcoming chapters. It would be kind of nice to read about Hermione tying him down so he can\'t hurt
himself and she takes advantage of him in that current state. **Wink** **Wink** Maybe he could tie her down. **Double wink**

Maybe after dinner at the Hog\'s Head, they won\'t make it back to Hogwarts and he shag her as he braces her up against a wall in a dark alley in Hogsmeade.
So many possibilities. Great work and keep those chapters coming.