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for I, Snape

by Avrild

person LilyMalfoy
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as always. Found this to be fackin hilarious. (Althea threw her arms around Dumbledore.
person amethyst
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! that\'s a lot to throw at the poor girl. Your image of Snape in this chapter is a lot darker and more depressing than what I would have imagined; but it fits the story very well. I hope Hermione can pull him out without sinking with him. Perhaps Las Vegas will help that.
person SaveSeverus
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hello,
i do apologize for not making regular reviews, but i read this straight through after seeing some user comments on wiktt. This story is wonderful, I\'m really enjoying how you\'re portraying snape, especially how you\'re venturing into his prat side. \"ear wax mrs granger, earwax,\" oh that was priceless! and i can very much see a canon snape making the same type of response, stone faced, pausing midcut to his pie, looking you straight in the eye, knowing full well he\'s being cheeky as hell.
I look forward to the rest.
person giova
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still wonderfull! I can\'t wait for the rest!
person PeevesPetpeeves
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee hee, I am quite enjoying your fic. (Although, I did cringe and go EW EW EW when Snape got it on with Mrs. Norris.) I look forward to more of your work, hun. :) Keep writing!

PeevesPetpeeves
person Rilla
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh how much I love this! I love that Snape turns out to be the opposite of everything she thinks he is. And Dumbledore and Snape\'s mom - my secret fantasy has always been to be married by an Elvis impersonator! And the end of the chapter was so beautiful.
person Shiv5468
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I did enjoy this chapter. Not for you the easy route of finding themselves to be soulmates after a quick bonk, but a rather more realistic reaction. I dont know why you call it a farce though, surely you mean reality! This is what people\'s lives are like - not pretty or sct tct to narrative constraints - but silly, disorganised and untidy.
person ne[
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me there is more! Greedy thing that i am....I have to have just a wee bit more. Please??
person lulu
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i very much enjoyed this chapter. poor snape is uncharacteristically so bewildered ao heo helpless. and therefore very funny. although i admittedly enjoyed the former chapter, i am a little disappointed that hermine wd take advantage of anyone when they were in different state of consciousness. if the sexes were changed, i am not so sure it wd go over so well.

nonetheless, i check every day, for an update.
thank you.
person Bindi
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great!