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August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oooohhh this is a very big TROUBLE!!! Quick Sev make a move! :) I really find your story exciting.
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August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh no oh no what the hell was that??
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August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
just finished your story and to tell you the truth....I LOVE IT!!!!!! Looking forward to your sequel :) keep it up yeah?
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April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story!
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story and can't wait to read the sequel.
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was really good and I really enjoyed it. However, there are a bunch of errors in it. Words are scrunched together or started and then go to symbols. You might want to try having a beta read this over and repost it. Also try a beta for your next one so that the reader doesn't spend so much time dicifering what you've written. Very well, I might add. Good job otherwise. Little grammer and punctuation mistakes here and there but nothing big other than the spelling. Good Job, keep up the good work, and lets see that sequel.
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! You made me laugh, you made cry and most of all you made me want to murder Ron! -Laughs-
This fanfic is brilliant however you seem to have a lot of spelling errors, maybe you should think about a Beta reader.
However, I have to say that Snape is fairly hard to write but you pulled it off with flying colours!
Once again - Great Job.
Best wishes, Kuri.
This fanfic is brilliant however you seem to have a lot of spelling errors, maybe you should think about a Beta reader.
However, I have to say that Snape is fairly hard to write but you pulled it off with flying colours!
Once again - Great Job.
Best wishes, Kuri.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. intence story. I LUV IT!! more, plz??
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lovely!! this is a wonderful story. its so hard to find a good mpreg story nowadays. ^_^ wat is the name of the sequel?
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If this were a work of theatrcs I would have been on my feet applauding like mad and begging for more. This was the first EVER slash and or MPreg piece I have ever written and at first, I must admit, I was afraid he che concept. This fandom is rather new to me, but if all of it's authors are as good as you are, my trip here will be well worth it! Keep writing and I cannot wait untill the sequel is finished! Ms.Rowling, herself, couldn't have done better!