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for More Than You Think You Are

by jillianw

person Sonni
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you had Hermione standing her ground in this chapter. To me, it seemed as though she was not only drawing on her own strength but that of Harry and Ron. The mix of emotions with Severus and Hermione coming together and then Hermione leaving was just right.
person Red Writing Hood
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh man...thats cold...I hope severus comes to his senses...and FAST!

Red
person shemhamforash
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Stunning, sad, beautiful, erotic....an accomplishment of a Mistress of fairy tales...

Waiting for more

Shem
person Laerai
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. I cried. *Cried* I don\'t hardly ever cry. It was truly moving, these last couple chapters.
person elementaldeity
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What you write is eloquent and tastefull, even tearfull. kyoukyou for expressing your talents. Please post soon.
person Brideofspike
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have read hundreds of fanfics, but this is the first time I have ever been compelled to review. I have never cried while reading Harry Potter fanfic before, and I have been sitting here bawling my eyes out. Damn you, I hate crying, but well done. I look forward to the rest of the story.
person Sammie
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was sooooo sad. I can\'t wait to see more. You really are a good writer. Thaou fou for sharing this story.
person Geena
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Indeed, extremely sad. But it will get better, right ?
And again Harry/Tonks !
This is rapidly becoming one of the most popular pairings in fanfiction.
Of course, none would ecomecome close to the pairing of all pairings: SS/HG
I\'m looking forward to the next chapter !
person Vweronica
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Plese write more..........I really want to know what Harry said to Ron in the Video. Please update soon.......thanx
person snarkysnape
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. i love your writing. i read the beginning to the lastest stuff you had. i was mad at first about you sending hermione away, bc she can fight like the rest of them, but i do see why you did it. and it made your story that much more poignant. it made me BAWL. hahaha. *wipes snot off face* but i think it\'s going along absolutely wonderfully, and i can\'t wait for the next update. i\'m so glad harry saw the snape/hermione thing and gave his blessing too, they are the absolute best together. now you\'d better have some fun fluffy goodness to make up for all that sadness!!!!
eagerly awaiting more,
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