rate_review Reviews

Wow, Quillusion, this is so good -- sexy and emotional, too. I really appreciated your recognition of the erotic power of the spoken word; I think it was in chapter 1 that you said something about the emotional/sexual jolt S gets from something his mystery lover says. The pacing was perfect; you handled the passage of months seamlessly. And what a cool idea -- that the present Hermione is unaware of the actions of the future-traveller Hermione in her present, so she can\'t give herself away to Snape.

I wish I could give you some constructive criticsm because I think those are harder to think out and express -- and I\'d like to offer you a small gift for the enjoyment I got from this -- but I can\'t! I think it must be perfect.

Candygirl

Here -- this is what I was thinking of --

\"I love how you sound,\" she said, and he felt a jolt of emotional pleasure go through him.

Now THAT is hot.

Candygirl

xxx

Lovely, comely ely wonderful in fact, I enjoyed it immensely.

I wish you could see me right now... I have tears streaming down my face from all the emotion I felt whenst ast a minute ago, I finished reading your story. I found this in a reccommended reading from Corazon, and as I adore her stories, I figured anything she woudl reccommend had to be amazing: and I wasn\'t disappointed. By the middle of the first chapterur sur story jumped it\'s way up to my list of top favorites, and now that I have finished it, I feel an unbelievable sense of joy at the outcome. The character development, the suspense, and the story... just INCREDIBLE! I\'ve never been so moved by any story as I have been by yours just now... it\'s incredible. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing your imagination and creativity with us... I am the better because of this! Please continue writing, your gift is too precious to waste :)

Thank you, I feel like a better person for reading this
~Leigh~

WOW, WOW, WOW!!! I LOVE this story & the way you pulled it all together!!! I really like the way you made everything work, her saving him in all ways possible!!! I will be making it a point to read more of your work, THANKS for a great story!!! Deb >^..^<

You are the finest fan fiction author I have ever read; and I\'ve been reading fan fiction for more than twenty years in this and that fandoms. Brilliant work.

I was so glad to find this story finally. I\'ve seen it on several lists of top SS/HG stories, and was getting frustrated by not being able to locate it. It was just brilliant and worth the wait.

Yayayay!!! I remember this story! It only had the first chapter than it disappered! So glad to finish it and it was good too! thanks

Yummy! I love it. Can\'t wait for more.