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for The Fab Five

by Jenjen

person Person With Taste
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
First of all, learn how to use a paragraph. Bad formatting is one of the most annoying things about bad fic. And this is SUCH A BAD FIC!!! I mean, IT\'S NOT EVEN PHYSICALLY POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BAD FIC, BAD FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This has been a flame.
person TwistedKiwi
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwsies! i wanna be lily! *pouts* once again you have made me so jealous with your wonderful writting! YOU SUCK! *pouts some more* well, actually, Sirius and James suck... hmmm, maybe a sequelAT NAT NIGHT! WEE! please update soon!
-you.know.who.