rate_review Reviews

Yours are the first Lucius/Hermione pairings I\'ve read, and you\'ve done a good job with the characterization of Lucius. After all Death Eaters cannot spend all their time on murder, rape, and pillaging. There are other things in life. I also liked very much the change in Lucius from completely self serving for gratuitous pleasure to actually asking her to be his wife. Draco was an interesting characterization, you explored his neuroses quite well. I missed Ron\'s volatility, however, it makes sense that he would be consumed by the entirety of the Weasley clan. I look forward to your continuation of the Senior Project which I\'ve also begun to enjoy.

I never thought I would have liked a Hermione/Lucius fic... When some people recommended me this story I had my doubts. I will never doubt recs again ;)
I love this story. Your portray of Lucius is really interesting and different from what I read before. And the smut is great! What else I can ask in a fic? Well... you did say that you would write an epilogue... at least I would want to know if Draco produced an heir... or if someone else (apart from Harry, Draco and Severus) accepted rel relationship...
As I said, I love this fic. *runs to her webpage to add it to her list of recs* It\'s a great story!

Chapter 8. With the orchids. I can\'t think in proper sentences, dammit; that was -hot-! I promise I\'ll e a e a more coherent, thorough review when I\'ve read the rest of the story, but had to comment.

Dear gods! Yum!

What a wonderful story!You said at the beginning that Lucius was a bit OOC,but I think
he might well try to adapt in order to protect the family name and fortune.Hermione is
well suited to him as she has the courage to stand up to him and is capable of matching
his intellect.Incidentally,I loved your made-up swear words.Actually I read something
a bit like them in a historical novel.How do you know Arabic?I happened to know that
word because my husband is from the Middle East.I\'m still sniggering at the last chapter where Hermione says that Lucius only beats her if she asks him to.I\'ve had such a good time reading this and would like to thank you for providing such fine
entertainment for cold winter nights.
luciusdominus

finally i finished reading your story, and i have only one thing to say....I WORSHIP THE GROUND YOU WALK ON!!!!
the way you put the eroticism to your story is truly amazing and the protrayal of lucius and hermione are perfect!!!!
can hardly wait for the final chapter of this truly amazing fic.
now i\'m off to read the last 2 stories that i\'m missing \" the wedding\" and \"the diary\" that i know are going to be just as amazing as your lucius stories;)

LUMEN

I loved this, I can\'t wait for more of your writing! Normally I don\'t like Lucius being too nice, but you make him sexy even when he\'s being just a little sappy!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thsi is really good and you ahven\'t updated in a while. Please Please update soon.

Please write more! I\'ve never read Hermione/Lucius before, but I was instantly hooked. Incredibly good, and very, very sexy (must admit that I\'m hoping for some dungeons in the future ;).

I liked the orchid scene - worked very well, and I liked your description of the e. Ie. I also like Harry/Draco as a non-perfect but loving couple. Best of all, though, I liked the pairing :)

ARGH! Am about to write my own story of Angst whilst pulling out my long, grey streaked hair. Am really trying to be patient, but when are we going to find out what Sev has to say about all of this?

please update soon
~Sugar