rate_review Reviews

I fucking LOVE you. I never thought of Lucius/Hermione, but it\'s brilliant. And he proposed to her? Ugh, so romantic and gorgeous and flled with great smu. You do good thigns. Ugh, i seriously just can\'t form words. I just really love this fic and all the horribly wonderful naughty things that happen. Thanks for writing it!

Are you still \"definitely\" planning on writing more? You really should think about continuing this. But then again, I suppose we readers can more or less just imagine them living happily ever after. So maybe you want to do something to them that\'ll force them to work through their difficulties (whatever they may be). I dunno. Or maybe just one more dungeon scene.

I know some people hate it if Lucius gets too soft (not a comment on his virility) but I loved this story, especially the smut!!

You really wrote a great story here. It is captiviating all the way through and has very credible and interesting characters. I am in awe of how you manage to keep the whole story within the Manor and it never gets boring. I also really like your Lucius - he is very canon, and even though you seem to feel that he drops somewhat away from that, I do not agree *S* We, the readers, are never truly sure where he stands on anything; and he gets exactly what he wants all the way through.
Making him a whole person is not, as such, anti-canon in my opinion, and thus your Lucius stands out as a really well-written and interesting person.

i found you story to be really amazing, except for the dungeon scene. it seemed to hurried. it didn\'t even start to give a view of what lucius keeps in his dungeons, and i think that you could have added in some of the items that were mentioned earlier, but overall, well done!

This story is really amusing. I think Lucius, in your story is really appealing
and an intresting character. Keep up the good work.

Is this story finished? I hope not! It is hard to find HG/LM parings and this one is at the top of list...excellent work! The way you have written the SM scenes could cause a few to play the game a bit.

great stuff loved it,well done!!!

It is difficult NOT to finish this in one sitting...albeit the lower half is starting to tingle due to prolonged sitting (as well as vicarious stimulation!). Pleased to discover that LM can be such a captivating character -- villians really are more fun to play with! Can\'t quite wrap my head around HP/DM -- does add a funny dimension to the family dynamic, though. Well, well done!

Ilove this story please update soon