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by Lizski

person Bob Saget
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DDDDDOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE OR ELSE I WILL HAVE TO KILL YOU IN MANY WAYS........NOT ALL OF THEM NICE!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE NOW YOU FUCKIN FUCK!!!!
person Bob Saget
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FUCK YOU YOU FUCKIN FUCK!!!!!!! UPDATE THIS FUCKING STORY!!!!!!!
person Citten
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story! I would only hope that you could let Hermoine and Lucius change thier minds about wanting children or at least one. Perhapes they really could fall father in love and want one, now this is just what i would like so don\'t do it on my account but it would be grand! :) Love, ya
person GOD!!!
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AMAZING!!! NOW GET THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT SOON!!! OR ELSE I WILL HAVE TO KILL YOU!!!
person i eat legos!
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE HELL!!! GET THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT SOON!!! I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY AND I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!
person Bob Saget
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE FUCK???? YOU KILLED OFF GEORGE DAMNIT!!!! I HATE YOU! GOERGE NEEDS TO LIVE SO HE CAN MARRY KATIE BELL, THEY CAN HAVE HOT SEX, AND MANY CHILDREN!!! THIS WON\'T WORK IF YOU KILL OFF GEORGE!!! CHANGE THAT NAME TO FRED RIGHT FUCKING NOW!!! I HATE YOU!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person natti
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fantastic! I was slightly scared by the initial pairing, however in my judgement I thought you did it extremely well!
I really don\'t have too much literary comment as I think you\'re writing is positively bri;lliant.
However there are a few words in the later chapters thathave strange things happening to them.
I can\'t really explain its like you typed on eword, deleted half the word and then kept typing.
Maybe I\'m wrong. Just thought I\'d try and help out.
Once again I think its unbelievably fantatstic.I only hope that you are kind and put in an epilogue soon that includes some kind of conclusion for harry and draco too.
Best wishes and good luck!
Natti
person Ajax
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are not stopping here? This is brilliant and beautiful, please do continue!
person killisandra
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU CAN\'T LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! jeez, i nearly had a heart attack when i saw there was no link for the next chapter. come on, give me another chapter, pretty please...