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September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked the chapter:) You\'re right, it shouldn\'t be rushed. Well at least Lucius is enjoying himself. Wouldn\'t it be just like him to slip some potion in her drink to make her horny? Please update soon:)
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September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I will be anxiously anticipating that next chapter! Lets hopek dok doesn\'t interfere(don\'t you hate it when they actually expect you to work there sometimes? I do;-) I have never read a Lucius-Hermione fic before- I\'m amazed by how much I\'m enjoying this. Nice touch to add the bit about her having a crush on Severus, though, at least I don\'t feel like a total traitor. Anyway, youre doing a great job with a character i think would be hard to write. I can\'t wait for more!
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September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is going really well, and I can\'t wait to see how it turns out! I am thouroughly intrigued, so you have to post the next chapter really really really soon, okay? Thank you!
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September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
They were both really great chapters. It good they didn\'t have sex yet. I like it when he toys with her desires. I know Lucius hasn\'t had anyone in a long time, but how long has it been since Hermione\'s been with someone?
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September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You certainly have *my* pulse going!! Pleeeeeze don\'t stop!! I\'ll die from anticipation if you do! hehe
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September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap! I just read chapter four and realized that it was the last chapter you had written. This is really good- I think you\'ve done an excellant job writing Lucius. I hope you are able to update soon!
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September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Upon perusing the list of current updates, I ran across this endeavour
and have become pleasantly entertained with the chapters [4] offered
thus far. The verbage is eloquent, visual and seductive. The plot
development is good and the canons have been demonstrated with style.
Looking forward to thet int installment and curious to see how the
seduction of HG will unfold. The lines have been laid, it will be interesting
to see how they are played out.
.:| Avernim |:.
and have become pleasantly entertained with the chapters [4] offered
thus far. The verbage is eloquent, visual and seductive. The plot
development is good and the canons have been demonstrated with style.
Looking forward to thet int installment and curious to see how the
seduction of HG will unfold. The lines have been laid, it will be interesting
to see how they are played out.
.:| Avernim |:.
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September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I usually love DM/HG fics, but either Malfoys will do:) It\'s great how you\'re setting up the tension(?) between them, but lets get to the smut soon. Can\'t wait, write more:)
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September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Been having troubles getting through! This is such a wonderful story and I cannot tell you how VERY much I enjoy this story!! Please don\'t stop!