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for Lucius\' Bookshelves

by Lizski

person Hannah
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Yay! This is a great story! Keep up the good work, because I have no patience! *LOL* On a more serious note, this is an awesome story. I like your OOC Lucius too. Don\'t change him! And having Hermione betrayed by the Ministry was a brilliant way/reason to send her to Lucius\' arms. I love it!
person Sam
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is great, update soon
person NightMoth
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"....sprehe phe petals for me...\" VVVVery erotic! BTW, how do ppl tie their hair with a leather thong? I\'m asking coz I\'ve tried it but it keeps slipping off. Maybe there\'s a secret to it. Could you ask Lucius the next time you see him? Thanks a bunch. Keep *up* the good work!
person Arsinoe
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is very well done-interesting, erotic, and well-characterized. I like your Lucius--a wicked man, yes, but wil human needs. He\'s obviously hideously lonely. Having a pleasant and interesting companion who understand his interests--and is a wonderful lay--could easily trump all the tired old blood prejudices. If they tried being a couple, it would be interesting to see people\'s reactions. Some would consider her a traitor, others a shameless gold-digger. And what of Draco? I\'ll be interested in seeing where you go with this.

And I agree with Hermione. Burning any sort of book is a stupid, evil deed.
person Ira
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story, wonderfully written - Lucius is such a chameleon and you have portrayed him superbly - hope you write more soon!
person Apollonia
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
One word, five syllables - fan-FUCKING-tastic!!!!!!!
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This si great and I don\'t know that much about cross-breeding plants either. I think you are doing a terrific job!! YEAH!! Go you!
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, I just LOVE this story and can\'t wait to read more! I could totally see Lucius behaving this way. It is very realistic!
person Sher
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was an incredible chapter. I loved the whole setting up of that entire scene in the greenhouse (inclement weather, Lucius telling her about the orchids and getting very descriptive in the process, etc.) I wouldn\'t have lasted half as long as Hermione did! ;D I can\'t wait until she becomes even more comfortable with Lucius and allows him to open up that \"dark side\" of hers! Bring it on!

Cheers,
Sher
person deedee
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank god there\'s going to be smut in the next chapter! Hell, if Hermione doesn\'t go in the dungeons with Lucius, I\'ll go:)