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by Lizski

person Persephone
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story continues to rack up the house points! Please continue!
person luciushoar
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT CANT WAIT TO SEE MORE LOVED THE PART WHERE LUCIUS OFERED EVERYTHING UPDATE MORE SOON PLEASE CANT WAIT LOVED IT TO MUCH I THINK OH WELL LOE HUGS KISSES LUCIUSHOAR
person deedee
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hate bad timing!!! If only she stayed in bed a little longer or if he had been there earlier, they wouldn\'t be having these terrible ideas. If she knew he wanted a relationship with her, would she even want to have a relationship with him?
I\'ve been thinking, Lucius has made several references that Draco will probably not produce a child to continue the Malfoy name. So does that mean there could be a baby between Lucius and Hermione? Maybe it would seem accidently, but it\'s actually a way to keep her with him. It was just a thought. You could kill me now because I was probably way off.
Please write more:)
person catseye
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i have to admit, i\'ve been just overlooking your story untill now, because HG/LM pairing didn\'t seem to appeal to me.
but after the book burning i just read your story again from the beginning, and i have to say I\'m absolutely fascinated
by this story. would\'nt have thought it after i knew the pairing. i love your lucius. you start with the lucius we all know,
and gradually change it slightly to the person who might fit our heroine. absolutely great!
hope you update soon.
bye,
catseye
person animegrl
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
another escellant chapter. Wow, yes lucious is a little out of character. But what about his dungons, you can put him back into character down there right. please tell me yes. I love Lucius stories, because of his personality, please don\'t take that away please
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is such a wonderful story! More seduction, please?
person Sher
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t read many het fics, but I\'m still enjoying this one immensely. I agree with the others on here who have said that Lucius is still very true to form. I just think the emotions and thoughts he\'s only beginning to tap into have always been a part of him, even on the inactive level they\'ve existed on before Hermione came to the Manor. He\'s just never been permitted to express them before now (\"Malfoys do not touch\") and because of Hermione, we\'re just seeing another side to a man that I\'ve always perceived as being very complex.

On an entirely unrelated note, I hope those...er...implements are polished, because I\'m awaiting the trip to Lucius\' dungeons with bated breath (and somehow, I don\'t think I\'m alone here)! If our favourite Slytherin\'s past behaviour is anything to go by, Hermione will never know what hit her :D.

Cheers!
Sher
person giova
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, It made my day to see another update of this fic! I kind of like seeing Malfoy a little OOC, after all, he seems to have relatively few positive characteristics in the books, and yet I find myself kind of liking him. So, its nice to imagine that he might be hiding something beneath the evil surface. Looking forward to more!
person Andrian
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a very well written intriguing erotic story...just read the entire thing...bravo
person Erika
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn. That\'s all.