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by Lizski

person deedee
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is a bit OOC at this point, but it fits perfectly in the story right now. Great Chapttherthere seems to be a lot of little hints. I love this part:
\"...True, I would not ask
person Sher
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"Yes, you are safe with me.\"

GAH! As if Hermione should need any further encouragement after that. I\'m glad that Lucius is still being Lucius. How can you not love the guy? Even after his admissions to Hermione, he\'s still retaining those qualities that would keep most people on their toes anytime they\'re around him (except for Hermione, methinks). Makes him all the more doable...LOVABLE, I meant lovable!

Nah, I meant doable...

Cheers!
Sher
person deedee
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about that, I hit the wrong button:)
I loved this part:
\"...True, I would not ask you to bare my children.\" His lips curved briefly into a smile.\"But that is not a fate I would wish on anyone.Nor can I offer you my name at this point.\" Again the corner of his mouth twitched.
I think Lucius is obviously thinking something that he is not saying here. Earlier, he did say he wanted her with him permanently.
I can\'t wait for more of the story. Please update soon:)
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the best story i have read with this pairing. I am really looking forward to the smut coming up. I wonder is Hermione gonna visit the dungeon rooms yet? i can\'t wait for that.. kinky!Hermione.. yea!
person anon
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this LM and this fic! Great job.
person Apollonia
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite Lucius/Hermione stories ever. I\'ve read a number of them and this one is definitely in my Top 10. I\'ve even taken the liberty of printing it up to read whenever I don\'t have access to a computer. Your words are excellent and the plot is exquisite. I like how Lucius\' heart softens towards Hermione and how she, in turn, softens towards him. Keep up this masterpiece.
person GeekGoddess
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...your are an excellent writer...I love the hg/lm pairing...and I am loving this story...
person Persephone
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very impressed with Lucius\'s explanation of why he became deatheater and being absolutely unapologetic about it. Always figured Lucius for a pragmatist rather that a fanatic.

I too have saved this fic, it\'s the only one I have saved, because it may be the best Lucius fanfic I\'ve read.

Looking forward to the next chapter with much anticipation.
person animegrl
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hay great again. If you need some help with the dungeon scene, i have done some s &m, and some sub/dom, so i could help you if you would like. well great story keep it up :-)
person Anna
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say that I love this story. I can\'t stop reading it. I look on here everyday for updates. Your writing is wonderful! I\'m really looking forward to the next chapter. (Grins broadly). Please keep up the good work and update soon!!!