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I know.....the words are needed to cement it. Excellent so far anlooklook forward to more. More like han not....the ministry will not be happy with her for this.

Mm, If i\'d have known before starting to read this that lucius was going to do the sorta feelings thing I would never have started to read this - which would have been a crying shame because it is just brilliant. You keep his edge whilortrortraying a more unusual characterisation of him, and I love it. The smut monster in me can\'t wait til he gets her in the dungeaons though!

LOVED IT LOVED IT AND LOVED IT CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT PLEASE UPDATE SOON

I really love this story! :) Been a fan of it since the first chappie appeared...........Really am enjoying your characterizations of both Hermione and Lucius--gives both 3 dimensions/depth not found in too many other versions of this pairing. Can\'t wait to see the next installment.

Loved the new chapter and cant wait for the next one.
Keep up the good work!!

Wow - I\'ve just discovered your story and I am enjoying it immensely!! You have a fantastic writing style - it really draws the reader in. I was also fascinated when I discovered that you had chosen to write about Lucius - there\'s not many stories out there that include Lucius as a main characterspecspecially not in a romantic way!! Ls iss is such an amazing character - mysterious, cruel, sly, cunning, deceitful...yet charming...and so damn *HOT*!! I always have a soft spot for the \'bad boy\' - there\'s nothing like a \'bad boy\' to rock your world, hmm? Usually I\'m a fan of Draco - *sigh* - but I couldn\'t resist reading about Lucius, especially if he looks and acts anything like he did in the movie \"Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets\" - damn!! I am highly intrigued as to where you are going to take this story, namely Lucius\' and Hermione\'s relationship. Your plot-line is ingenius - it\'s refreshing to read something that is not the *same* as everyone elses. Your portrayal of Lucius is priceless - and I\'ve only read the first three chapters!! He\'s perfect - right down to the sadistic pleasures and desires he has!! He\'s exactly as I had imagined him to be - you have a real gift in the character development and portrayal dementment - well done. Well, I am going to go now and read the rest of the chapters you have posted. If it\'s not too much hassle, can you please e-mail me with the names and addresses of any other stories that you have written. I can\'t get enough of your writing style and I would be greatly appreciative. My e-mail address is:

jodiegreen@optushome.com.au

Thankyou, and I wish you all the best with your writing.

Jodie

This is a really neat story. It makes me look deep down and look at the facts of life, corruption of government, and heritages. I was wondering, that when you update you could e-mail me? If you can\'t then that\'s alright. Love it! You have a good style of sentencing. Update soon!

Very intriguing! You know, Hermione and Lucius could have great times together. Not just great sex,(though that is very important), but with his money he could free her from the need for a 9 to 5 job. She could devote herself to travel and research with him, free of Ministry constraints. He would love guiding and molding her and showing her the uncensored wizarding world. And then of couse, they have the library and greenhouse to play in. Not a bad life. Many would be scandalized, but many more would be secretly envious. As you showed in the letter scene, Hermione will be of great help to him interpreting Potter and his son\'s relationship with him. She could well be the facilitator that makes a new relationship with his son possible. Write on!

I really like this story. It\'s very explanitory in response to the thoughts and feelings of both Lucius and Hermoine. I hope to read more soon! ^_^

This is fabulous! You did a great job interpreting Lucius\'s motives. I love the fact that you didn\'t make him feel guilty and repentant. Wow, I just can\'t say enough about how much I love this.