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for Lucius\' Bookshelves

by Lizski

person deedee
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The little Draco and Hermione scene was cute. I\'m glad he finally approves of her.

Luciure lre likes cutting off her panties. Maybe he should buy her some more before she starts walking around with none. Hell, he would probably like that:) So what would he do to her if she didn\'t do what he said?

\"Demon lover\" is the prefect description for your Lucius. Please write more.
person Kiristeen
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t gotten all the way through what you\'ve written yet, but I just *had* to review, in the middle of chapter eight.

I can see few things that would upset Hermione more -- barring a living person/sentient being being lvedlved -- than the burning of books, no matter their content! I can picture Hermione, imagining the great loss resulting from the burning of the library at Alexandria ages ago, for instance, horrified at the potential for learning lost.

You\'re portrayal comes as absolutely no surprise, and I can *definitely* see it as one more nudge in Lucius\' direction. The ministry\'s betrayal of her ideals and the promises made to her will be felt very profoundly, I\'d imagine, and will stay with her for some time to come, affecting just about every decision she makes in the future.

Kiri -- who\'s eagerly going back to reading!
person Michelline
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHH!!! Nice chapter. Glad to see Hermione and Draco resolve their differences. Or actually, that Draco has resolved his differences with Hermione. It\'s a shame that Harry still sees all things in Black and White. You\'d think he would have learnt by now - considering who his lifemate is.

Re the Lucius/Hermione pairing vs the Severus/Hermione one - go for it! We have TONS of SS/HG but not nearly enough LM/HG. You could just become my favorite... LOL.
person luscious lucius
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
absolutely delightful.........i lurrrvve your lucius...could make him more dominating! please add more chapters soon or i will die of curiosity..hehehe
person deedee
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s interesting that Lucius wouldn\'t mind having children with Hermione, if she wanted them. I guess he\'s more serious about hern I n I thought.
Man, Draco has issues. Maybe he should see someone about that. Doesn\'t St. Mungo\'s have a psychiatric\'s department? The talk he and Hermione had sounded like one of those \"talks\" a stepparent has with a stepchild before they marry that child\'s parent. The last part of their conversation totally reminded me that I think you promised us another dungeon scene with Lucius and Hermione. Please write soon:)

person SilentSoul
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very go o o d
person MsLessa
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your right the line...\'even sociopaths need love
person Adriana
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying this story. I\'ve never been interested in a Lucius/Hermione pairing (too weird!), but you\'ve managed to make it plausible. The interpersonal relationships between all the characters are rather fascinating, especially the father/son relationship between Draco and Lucius. And I have to say that your version of Lucius Malfoy is absolutely delicious. Interesting story and I look forward to reading more.
person Michelline
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Another chapter. Have I mentioned I love you? LOL. Anyway... Very informative chats we had here. Draco and Hermione\'s ws ok, but to my mind, the more interesting chat was with Lucius and Harry. So... There\'s a possibility of Lucius and Hermione tying the knot and having kids. Very interesting. OK - so it\'s a long shot, but I can dream, can\'t I? Perhaps Draco won\'t want to be a father? He\'s pretty messed up, emotionally. Think he could get over not being THE HEIR? Like I said, I can dream, right?
person Rilla
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well done! Draco was a totally believable mess. And I love Harry acting like he\'s Hermione\'s father toward Lucius.