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September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A very complex and intriguing plotline. : ) I\'m enjoying reading this quite a bit. I can\'t even begin to imagine how this would affect wizards as a whole! devastating, I\'ll bet.
You mentioned this being something pla plan to turn in as an assignment -- cool way to do it! -- I was wondering if you wanted readers to mention the kind of typos that a spellchecker wouldn\'t catch? (Not that are many)
Kiri -- looking forward to more of the story
You mentioned this being something pla plan to turn in as an assignment -- cool way to do it! -- I was wondering if you wanted readers to mention the kind of typos that a spellchecker wouldn\'t catch? (Not that are many)
Kiri -- looking forward to more of the story
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September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your story was wonderful.it was a change from the stories i have read.i would love to know if your going to write more for it.please e mail me if you do
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September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice start
might want to fix a few spelling errors before you hand it in.
I hope your tutor likes being a HP character now. :)
keep up the good work, look forward to reading more of it.
might want to fix a few spelling errors before you hand it in.
I hope your tutor likes being a HP character now. :)
keep up the good work, look forward to reading more of it.
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September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dear ShemHamForash:
Thank you for scinscinating story! I don\'t know how many readers will follow you through the technical material, but I did (physiology minor quite a number of years ago).
It\'s like a detective story: we have the \'body\' (the symptoms), now the actual condition must be diagnosed before a cure must be found. Most often in my writing, I\'m doing the same thing but in the forensic psychology field.
I love the relationship between Hermione and Severus; his tenderness is touching if a bit OOC at times. Hermione is, well, herself, and that\'s great.
Please continue this great tale!
Blessed be,
Dame Niamh