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for The Hepatic Hex

by shemhamforash

person Penthesilea
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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person Rilla
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the way Hermione volunteered. So perfectly like her. Ack...I want to write more of a review, but two children are crying for me... Well done!
person uscarchie
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW, what a twist. Don\'t worry, no flamage. Just finish it soon?
and then, one has to wonder about the definition of virginal... you\'d think touching\'d still be okay...
person Alia
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO! That\'s just EVIL!!! AHHHH!

Wonderful new chapter though...the suspense is just amazing!

~Alia :)

person Kiristeen
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ack!!!!!!!!!! This chapter puts me in mind of the Tower Keepers in the books of Marion Zimmer Bradley. : )~ I hope you manage to work something out, though. ::sniff sniff:: That\'s one hefty sacrifice . . . for *both* of them.


Kiri
person uscarchie
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great! I still want more tho....
person Kiristeen
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ack!!!! What a horrific nightmare! ::shudders:: The subconsious is a horrible thing sometimes.

Kiri
person mssudie
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like most of it but the relationship was built a little toocklyckly...and i believe the \"queen of the magic world\" line to be not quite right. the rest is great! who would have thought to have a vampire the the blood. please finish!!
person Helena
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OI
I\'m enjoyng this fic ,please try to update soon!!
This is getting interesting!
person uscarchie
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. The way you\'ve worked with the plot and the science... the science is accurate enough that it lends to the believability of the piece. The romance between Snape and Hermione is also handled well with their characters. You\'re doing a great job, I wish I could fast forward to the piece being done... :) I can\'t wait.