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for The Hepatic Hex

by shemhamforash

person Alia
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ll bribe, I\'ll beg...I want the next chapter!!! How bout the whole rest of the story maybe???

Omigosh, that was incredible. And so sad (I am truely teary eyed). I just hope that Chinese proverb is right!

~Alia
person damademuerta
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh if only you could have heard the truely evil laugh that escaped from me when I finished with this chapter.! Yea for evil cliffhangers! I have enjoyed your story thus far, and look forward to reading its completion. I\'m not very articulate, so this is about as good as a review gets from me.
Dama
person Daya
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*gasps* *chokes* *wails* *flings self on mercy of Shem*

Please... more... more I beg of you oh darkone, mercy (have resorted to desperate begging since intimidation doesn\'t work *grin*)

Has Hermione really gone over to the dark side? Is she really going to die? How can she kiss Snape like that without dragging him off to the nearest dark corner and having her wicked way with him?????

*searches round desperately for silver platter, finds one, realises doesn\'t have Snape, curses long and loud into the...ahem.... morning*

Daya.
person Kiristeen
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Evil! Evil incarnate, I say!

Beautiful, angstfilled chapter!

Severus was utterly delicious in his thoughts about \'letting anyone who cared know\'. That was the best.

And bribery. . . . hmmmmm. How about lots more Sev and Hermione stories from me???

Ah well, it was certainly worth a try. LOL


Kiri
person Rilla
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You can\'t leave it there you know! And of course they have to be happy! My pregnancy hormones can\'t take any more tragic stories.
person Lady Aidil
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It1s truly brilliant and breathtaken story and tha last chapter was incredibly good,very tense and full of feelings,however sorroful and dark as well,I like every piece of your work and am waiting for continuation,especially that you left damned cliffhanger at the chapter`s end once more-you are really mercifull and,of course,still gorgoreus writer.
person Lady Aidil
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It`s truly brilliant and breathtaken story and the last chapter was incredibly good,very tense and full of feelings,however sorrowful and dark as well.I like every piece of your work and am waiting for inuainuation,especially that you left the damned cliffhanger at the chapter`s end once more-you are really mercifull and,of course,still gorgoreus writer.
person Kiristeen
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Well *that* was certainly un expected twist of why Severus was so \'interested\' in the de la Rosa family. LOL I was thinking in totally opposite directions -- which I\'m pretty sure was your intention all along. ::smirks:: Love it. I love being surprised like that, ie because it stems from a false assumption on my part. Can\'t wait to see who this plays out.

Kiri (still disappointed about the having to remain a virgin thing, though) LOL
person Alia
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I know this is going to be exactly like my other comment but...

AHHHH!!! EVIL!!!

Ok, sorry, had to get that out. I swear, the twists in this story are seriously keeping me on my toes. I have to ask, does it have a happy ending, as in SS/HG finally together? I could use some light at the end of the tunnel...*sniff*

Can\'t wait for more
~Alia
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh shem, my one my only....
Ok, hope that didn\'t freak you out, just loving your story so much. This is going in such a neat direction...how are you going to save their love?? How are they gonna get it on?? Why must life be so complicated?? Thank you for you wonderful comments on my story. I have gotten so much love from so many, of course I always want more. I am a revwhorwhore...I think we all are...or is it just me??
Much love,
Tigress