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for The Hepatic Hex

by shemhamforash

person Kiristeen
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
okay, ::preparing howler:: \"just in case\" LOL


I\'m on the edge of my seat waiting for the resolution. : )

OH, and before I forget. A SECOND YEAR?????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! I died laughing. Lucius would have been beyond livid! Personally I\'m tickled pink. ::smirks:: That was definitely a unique torture for the arse. : )~

That was very original what you had Hermione do. She \'died\', but isn\'t dead. Rather like having your cake and eating it too!


Kiri
person Daya
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You were indeed right, my dear, begging is for lesser mortals than ourselves, and I simply cannot imagine what came over me. I simply do not want to consider the consequences had our dear Sev caught me in such a humiliating position, perhaps destroying my one chance to get him exactly where I want *raises eyebrow* by my own weakness.

You are indeed the mistress of torture, and I am most impressed by hermione\'s actions, albeit it, she is a stubborn little thing don\'t you think? I\'m still holding out for a happy ending though, but I can see you plan to torture us to the extreme here...

Its worth it though, for the image of the Deatheaters being \'studyed\' on by the students. Lucius Malfoy in a tickling hex...wonderful!

Yours Respectfully, still anticipiating your epilogue of Snapey goodness

Daya
person tigress
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW, darlink, you love your cliffhangers...but I love them too. Keeps me comming back for more(that among other things) It is very late and I am very tired and would love to write a long and flowing review...but as I said. Plus, I don\'t think that a long flowing review is my style or yours. Let\'s just say it\'s really great and I am very excited for the finale. Oh yes, also, this is so very inventive. Very, very.
Much love,
tigress
PS I want Severus-Hermione loving. I want it I want it I want it
I have no life.
person missingthecat
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
what an interesting take on your story!
loved the terms you discussed, educational and funny!
would love to read more from you.


cheers
the cat
person Alia
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* I am so crying right now. That was absolutely beautiful. What a wonderful ending. I am such a sucker for gushy romantic stories. I hope to see more from you some time!

~Alia
person Raven
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* *wibble*

that was a very lovely ending.

I hope you post what mark you got for this assigment it would be interesting to see.

well done to you
person Rilla
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect! That\'s all I really have to say. Yay! I have closure! Woohoo! (And you know, some days lately, early labor does not seem like such a bad idea! Out, out, damn baby!)
person Clair
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry! It was good though. But you made me cry! Albus criedG, tG, that was sad!
person Rilla
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on! You can\'t have him abandon her now, it\'s just getting good! That is going to be one hell of an epilogue!
person Theresa
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Shem,
your story is definitely one of the best pieces of fanfiction I have read so far, and, let me assure you, there have been many... The epilogue had me sniffling, it\'s 4:30, monday morning, and I should have completed my own Uni assignments tonight, but I really got hooked to your story, by the humour, at first. And now I know more about livers than I ever wanted to - I was almost in a fit when I realized I had forgotten what a Golgi apparatus is... *g*
Keep on writing, T.