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September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like what you have so far. I love getting Snape\'s psychological perspective because I think there is so much depth and so many possibilities there. You did a good job of capturing his despair and loneliness.
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September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When are you updating this? Hope soon, cos it\'s really good. The second chapter was...well...not nice subject matter, but it was really sensitively written. You should be real proud of this story. I\'d really love you to continue *hint, hint* :-)
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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Tigress Lily...very clever! I had to review this one, clearly I hope you turn it into a more than four chaptered story. The idea is indeed very good. Hmm, competition between Draco and Hermione, this I have to!
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-Blue Ribbon
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-Blue Ribbon
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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a stinker! Good grief! All he had to do was ask if they would help him. *sigh* Then again they probably would have said they had to study or something. Probably not a bad idea! Good start! Keep going!
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September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG i have been following your story and i love though the chapters are a bit short the plot is orginal and i love it !!!!!!! please wrtie more