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for With My Last Breath

by Reika

person SP777
schedule March 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful..and not too complex at all. Just simply heartbreaking.
person isilme
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tries to wipe the tears*
That was so heartbreakingly beautiful! I might as well be howling right now, it's so emotional... I can picture every image in my head, and the more I see them, the more I cry.
It was a wonderful plot, characterization, story...
Congrats!
<3
person Joey
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, just read the first part although I\'m supposed to be studying, and I *love* it. Expect further reviews as I continue.
person Joey
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was beautiful, which I say with literal tears in my eyes.

Thank you.
person sak
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an incredible and well-crafted piece the first time I read it and time has not dulled its lustre. Thank you for writing this, for the intensity and the destiny that reigns between two such men. Ron\'s POV closing this out with Draco\'s child was the perfect touch.
person Eldemar
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry again. i\'m so happy that you wrote a follow up fic to the original one.
this was a great story and i can\'t wait for the next installment.
i\'d be more upbeat if i wasn\'t still crying.
*kisses*
~Eldemar
person SandraM
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This is so intense. Excellent story.
person Eldemar
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please can u write a follow up to this fic? maybe where harry took malfoy and harry\'s death? PLEASE? i really liked this fic... and it was the first fict i t i ever cried at.
Congrats,
sincerely,
Eldemar
person Some Random Chick
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i loved this fic. the second chapter made me cry, which is saying something. i don\'t cry. or smile. or laugh. or show any emotion. ever. and yet, this fic has turned me more human than i thought i could be. i hope you write more fictions like this. angsty fics are good.
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You brought me to tears with chapter two, it moved me with a fascination I have never felt before. As a rule I almost never, ever read angsty fics that involve Harry killing Draco or vice versa, but your fic sucked me in. It was absolutely beautiful and heart-wrenching. I loved it and now I can\'t seem to stop crying. Well done!