rate_review Reviews

Great story! This is the most credible sounding version of this pairing I\'ve read (so far). Keep up the good work.

Oh dear God, the HAWTNESS. Love the chemistry between the two, a very carefully handltauttaut energy. Spot-on characterization of both Ron and Draco; devestatingly effective revelation about Draco at end of Chapter Three. I\'m no slash groupie but you had me in the grips of the story, so that tells ya something. Only concern is that point of view tends to shift, especially in Chapter One, where it goes from Draco POV to a sort of Ron/omniscient POV. So where\'s Chapter Four?

-E

i love this! ron/Draco is the BEST couple EVER! ^.^ please hurry up and continue!

:D
Luv it. Every word. Draco is such a wonderful bastard. He\'s already wiggled his way into Ron\'s brain, I wager that pretty soon it will be his pants!!! Ha ha... lol. *moves to next chapter with sinister aipatipation*

Ha... so this little plan of Ron\'s going to put him in Draco\'s pants??? Heh, heh. *one track mind here* They had dirty fantasies about each other!!!!! :D :D :D
\"They were in Ron\'s bed. And Malfoy\'s face wasn\'t swollen anymore. But something else was.\"
OMFG I love that line.
I\'m tired of writing. You know it\'s good... Next chapter, Yea!!

AAAAAAH WHERE THE HELL IS THE REST? *pounces you* WRITE MORE!!!! *starts aiming you to make you write the rest*

i am so glad so you can upload the third chapter finally~Poor draco,poor ron~I hope draco will continue lusting after and chasing and getting ron~hehe~

Ouch! Poor Draco! I like the way you had Ron dealing with his personal revelations. I look forward to seeing how you weave this story. : )


Kiri

Nice story...i like the POV\'s you give them..please write more
soon and i\'ll be sure to read it.

Oh for god\'s sake it took me so long to freakin\' figure out how to review your story! I thought I had to register and they wouldn\'t take my email address (yahoo isn\'t \"valid\"??) and apparently Lo is too short of a pen name. ARGH! Then, erm, I saw the little link at the bottom that said \"Review Hour Follows Hour.\" Whoops.
I\'m so surprised you\'ve had so many hits and no one has reviewed. So far it is amazing. It\'s amusing, though, because Ron in this story reminds me so much of Atrium Ron. Ha. Especially being hungry after thinking about sex!
Not only do I think you did a great job at capturing Ron, but I was also Harry, Hermione, and Draco. Especially Draco. Thank goodness you didn\'t make him an out of character emotional fluff. Your writing flows well and it was very funny at some points. Ha, never did think about Harry being hard during Quidditch before! Am very intrigued and you must post more ASAP! I am glad I checked back tonight after my internet went out- was so pleased to see chapter 2 up. It seems that\'s where it really gets going.
-Lo