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for When A Lion Became A Snake

by jayaare

person madamshark
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is an intriguring story. Will be on the watch for future chapters.
person HPfreak18
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was sad and touching. Especially Hemione\'s last thought when she was saying \"goodbye\" to Severus. Now it is time for more Lucious and Hermione though. I was so glad when I saw that you updated. My sister looked at me wierd when I shouted happily. I hope you update soon and when you do can you e-mail me at Slytherins4Ever@cs.com Just keep up the excellent job of writing.
person Crystal Jareth
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed that chapter although I confess I am eagerly awaiting the moment when Lucius takes centre stage. As always your portrayal of the characters was fantastic, I love your writing style. Can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person HPfreak18
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story. I hope one day you are plannto cto continue this.
person Temptation
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a wonderfully written story, and you should definately continue to write more on it. I can\'t help but notice Draco\'s small infatuation with staring at our heroine...Miss.Granger. Makes you wonder if he\'s coming down with a slight case of desire? Oh well, until you make a chapter with an answer to whether he\'s going to make a move on her, I\'m sure things will get more amusing.
person Hurricane
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic, unique story. Please continue, I can\'t wait to read what happens to our heroine next.
person daisy
schedule February 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
dude...that's some hot stuff
person AmetSphiSphinx
schedule January 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The first thing I do every time I am on the internet is to check for updates here. This is wonderful! I had almost given up on HP fanfiction, as it seemed to be the same old cliched stories going around and around again. This is in a class of it's own, original, gripping and well written. I've no idea how it is going to end, and thats how I like it. Please update soon!
person Laura
schedule January 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying reading this story and i can't wait for the updates! this story is very well written, and i've found myself totally drawn into the characters, plot, and feeling of this story. keep up the great writing!
person Phantom's Angel
schedule January 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You're confused about why this is successful!! Do you actually read what you write?! This fic is fantastic. The way you write the characters is amazing, especially Lucius given how little we actually know about him you have very little to work with, most fics I've read with Lucius have ruined him entirely but you have created, in my eyes at least, the ultimate Lucius. I want to hate him but I can't, he's too damn charming!
Also, compliments for the orgininal storyline, there have been very little of them lately. I LOVE THIS FIC!!!
Keep it up, please.

The Phantom's Angel.