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for When A Lion Became A Snake

by jayaare

person Serenity
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story! Very seductive. Please post more and it would be interesting to see some Draco action too hehehe. more soon!
person Jennifer
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic! very intriguing and definitely different from anything else I have read. Keep up the great work and please let me know when you update!
person Linis
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! Update and a good one... seems like the mission is moving on according to all her plans... think Hermione should be careful though otherwise she might end up falling for the malfoy either that or malfoy will find out that she\'s not always in her office when she says she is.... dangerous...

Can\'t wait for more.


LINIS
person CrystalJareth
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! You updated!! And it didn\'t take ages! Please keep the updates coming, I just love this story.
person Hurricane
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooohh, another wonderful chapter, great job once again. I really enjoyed the dialogue between Lucius and Hermione in this chapter (Lucius Malfoy:entrepreneur or evil lackey). It shows a more human side of Lucius, yet continues to demonstrate his potential for evil. Once again, great job and I can hardly wait for the next chapter!
person HPfreak18
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job and this time, make the gaps between chapters sooner!! Keep going cna\'t wait for more!
person Deni
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
R u going to update soon? I\'m dying to read the rest!(wails)Is there going to be a dm/hg/lm going on?(squeals) That would be the sexgod!!! Please update soon!pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease(inhales)pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease
person Linis
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! This fic is soooooooooo well written it\'s amazing. I Can\'t wait to read more and I do hope you will update soon....

LINIS
person gsnape
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please continue i love this story
person hurricane
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, chapter 11 is even more heart wrenching than any of the others. Great job again, I was very excited to see an update on this story, I hope another will come soon. Excellent writing.