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for Pretty Woman

by Tatiana

person Fish [not signed in]
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh oh oh oh OH!!! THIS IS GRRRREAT!!!

More soon!

Will Sevvie-kins come and save Hermione? Will Lucius go all mental and lunge for Severus? FIND OUT IN... MY GARAGE! *eyes sevvie-kins and lucius malfoy tied to chairs* mwahahaaaaaa!!!

as i said before: MORE SOOOOOOOOON!!!

You\'re one of my favourite writers!

Ciao,

Fish
person Silverose
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHH!!!! Now it makes sense!!! Oh poor Hermione!!! You are such a great writer!!! Oh No!! What is Severus going to do??? Please update soon, so we can fin find out!!! Love your work!!
person shelia
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh so cool! I cant believe you fed Lucius to the pirahnanas Now that is a new one. Thank you for answering the challenge and doing such a marvelous job.

Hugs
Andrian
person Virtual256
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I\'m eagerly awaiting more!

Virtual
person Plebe
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes. Hello. I\\\'m a small white kitten livin Pho Phoenix with my mum and stepdad and my fat smelly pug Zima. I like sex, chronic, and Ozzy Osbourne. SXRXRNR, if yeh get the message. I adore Cassidy from Preacher, Arcadian from Xmen 2099, and Severus Snape from the Harry Potter series. See, I have this thing for tall guys with long hair - perhaps it\'s an anime thing? (Hellooo, Sephiroth!) I\'m short, with short hair, and cranky at my \'petiteness\' as my dad puts it. I\'m just fooking short, kay? I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'m not fond of: people who can\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t spell when they flame, people who can\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t spell at all, people who can\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t punctuate, people who excel in math (OK, I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'m just jealous, I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'ll admit that), and people who think fantasy sucks. I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'lppilppily review your stories, proofread them, edit them, help you with them, and if I am so inclined, illustrate them. Oh, did I not say this before? I draw, too. Not very well, as some of my friends can, but better than stick figures; oh, and I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'m good at penises. I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'m an anime freak - although the Avatar thing says \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'akane\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\', it is most certainly NOT akane tendo from Ranma one-half. In fact, I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'m not even sure WHO that is, or what anime she came from. I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'m thinking Cardcaptors or maybe Ruroni Kenshin? Never mind. Email me if you\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'re bored, like my story, hate my story, want to talk to me, want to see pictures of my pets, want to see pictures of me (hah!), or want to collaborate on a fanfic - or for whatever. I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'m an amateur advice columnist without a column, and there\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s no problem I can\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t give you a solution to. (Yeh may not like the solution, but hey, you ain\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t payin\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\' me!) So. Yes. I tire of this tappa-tappa-tappa on my keyboard. My other names are Deanna (pronounced \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'Dee-on-ah), Big D (no, that wasn\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t a reference to Dudley, I had that name long before he did!), Psychotikitten, hey you, that tiny psycho bitch, and Dee. - D
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cheap. real cheap.
person amethyst
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This repost to chapter one definitely helps explain some of the stuff later in the story. This is very interesting. Please post again soon.
person Rilla
schedule September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love how you\'re weaving this story together. I admit that I really liked it that Luis Diego \"took care\" of Lucius and Bellatrix. Can\'t wait to see what happens next.
person Lizzie
schedule September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Grrrrrrrr. Doncha h8 Lucius Malfoy? Well, obviously you do, as you have built so well on his horrible personality! Anyways, as a fairly recent convert to HG/SS, i love this story! It had better be updated very soon, cos otherwise i won\'t remember to check for updates!
person Alanfan
schedule September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love this one. It\'s one of my favorite films, are you going to have a go at Runaway Bride next????????