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person Jade
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH! what a git!
person Helena
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I must say, since the first paragraph, I\'ve become addicted on this fic!
Just BRILLIANT!!
I\'m very excited about the new upcoming chapters, please try to update soon, can\'t hardly wait!!!!!!
person nesscafe
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a complete jerk! I can\'t believe he was mean enough to say those things and after he took her virginity! No heart at all! OMG! I would give him Hell for that!!! I hope she does! I know Severus is a bastard, but geeze!!! I didn\'t think he was stupid enough to say such cruel things about her. He has absolutely no respect for her whats so ever! I am so pissed at him! I hope she makes him pay for those mean words!
person Heather
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*grin* Awesome! She is going to have some fun with him, I can tell! Woner where they will go?

And once again, your English is better than many authors who are reportedly American or British, so kudos!
person Snape
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Omg, Truly amazing, please write more
person catseye
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! i can\'t wait for the next chapter. keeps me from thinking of the pain after my wisdom teeth got pulled out.
person Heather
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAYAYAYAYAYAY for Hermione/Snape smut! Poor thing musta been so frightened. *sigh* At least he was a gentleman. Keep writing, please!!
person nesscafe
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, not bad except he\'s calling her \"Miss Granger\" and she Mrs. Snape now or at the very least Hermione! Also she might should ask if she can call him Severus at least when they are in bed together. That would be a cute conversation! LOL! Anyway I found that last chapter kind of sweet even though they are still calling each other Professor and Miss Granger and they are married.
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I like how in the end they both wanted to be together. I hope you update again soon. Keep up the good work.
person Catherine
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG i canott wait for this conversation!!!! Woah i bet it will be good:P U better update soon me love...i love ur work...keep it up...:P

Catherine