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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay. I have sat her an entire day reading this wonderful story and have to say that the last chapter seems to be cut off. Are you able to check to see if the entire chapter got posted if so I must say that I am quite disappointed. I thought there would be more or at least a conclusion.
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading your wonderful story. Except that the last little bit has been cut off, or deleted. I thought this was one of the most well thought out and well written stories I have read in a long time. I really have enjoyed your writting style and I am going to be sure to read any other stories you have posted. I know it has been a while since you finished this story, but I stumbled apone it and I am glad I took the time to read it.
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Florence, dear, I am starting to think you enjoy making us cry. You\'re the \'Barbara Walters\' of the fan fiction world.
Every chapter makes me weep a little more. It is just so bittersweet.
BTW, it was Dumbledore, wasn\'t it?
Cheers.
Every chapter makes me weep a little more. It is just so bittersweet.
BTW, it was Dumbledore, wasn\'t it?
Cheers.
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey im jasmine and i have been trackin down the long and winding road to love and i thinks it marvelous its got everything any true fanficer could ever dream. Love hope marriage drama and jealousy beautfully writen i sent it too every onwe i know and they think its great soo keep up the good work
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry for your loss. This chapter was very good, do update. I can\'t wait tow whw what happens in the end. Keep up the great work!!
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is fantastic. You have a wonderful grasp of the english language. But you have left me hanging. What will happen next?
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bad cliffy Bad cliffy,,,,, oh leave me hanging like that............................ mmmmmmm damn but I don\'t feel bad when Severus gets ahold of Lucius Malfoy............. as all ways keep going on the excellent work.
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Flo, I am truly hoping Severus is going to open a can of whoop-ass all over Malfoy and the Death Eaters.
I am still holding out for a happy ending. Just if you are polling or anything.
Cheers.
I am still holding out for a happy ending. Just if you are polling or anything.
Cheers.
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February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
um wow is all I can sum up for this chapter.................................Severus is going to be pissed.......................keep up the excelnt work
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey- don\'t worry about your english! it\'s beautiful, beta\'d or not. i wish i spoke/wrote a second language so well. as for the story- i can\'t wait to read all of it! great intro. :D :D