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Harry is ill, make him better, Draco! Why is Harry so \'weak\' around Draco, I don\'t mean that he shouldn\'t melt whenever Draco looks at him, \'cause he should, but he seems have no will of his own, is that because of the Bloodbond? And have Harry melt more, much, much more. What happened to the rest of the Revolution? Are they slaves too? How did Draco manage to keep his name out of it all? This is one great fic! Cheers

I love your story to death (mmm, melty Sub!Harry and Sweet!Loving!SecretlyGood!Dom!Draco!) but all your chapters are so -short-... and why did Lucius change his mind so fast? He seemed all for Draco taking Harry as a slave in the first chapter, and then this.

I adore Narcissa - it\'s nice to find out that there\'s another good Black out there, even hiding. Up the Revolution!

What on Earth\'s wrong with Harry, besides former ill-treatment? Has the bond done something grody? Can\'t wait for more!

Hiya!

Me: Bad readers, bad readers! *continues to swat readers with ruler*
Random Person #2769: But wait! You\'re one of those readers!
Me: Uh-oh. *smack!*
(Scene . . . just fades to black.)

Okay, enough of that nonsense now. ^^;; I absolutely love this story! I started reading it the first day you ever posted. Sorry for not reviewing, but yeah...lurker.
Anyway, I love the concept, can\'t wait to see where it goes. Loving Draco\'s protectiveness over Harry. So sweet. *cuddles da Draco* But when is there going to be some loving? I know it\'s a bit soon, but... Just some little loving: kisses, hugs...something??? Eh, yeah...
Lucius doesn\'t seem to be too happy with Draco\'s choice either. He seemed all for it in the beginning and now he\'s all worried and junk... I like Narcissa in this fic so far too. She\'s cool and the loving, gonna-try-to-make-things-right mother figure...hehe...I love that. \'Tis a huge contrast from bastard!uncaring!unfeeling!doesn\'t-give-a!Lucius we all love to hate. :D

Anyway, to sum it up...I LOVE YOUR STORY! Please, please, please, update it again soon, and maybe with some longer chapters...? Err...I\'ll give you some eCookies. ^_^
Just thought I\'d try...hehe. Keep up the great writing!!

-C

WOW! This fic is awesome! Draco is awesome! You are awesome! I wonder, are you going to maybe explain a little about how Draco sent Dobby to help Harry out in canon? I\'m a true believer that he did, and it would work out great in this fic. Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story! I can\'t wait \'till the next chapter comes out. ^_^

Another fine chapter (5) I really enjoyed it, wonder what\'s going on with the bond he\'s got.. going to be interesting to see that\'s for certain, and how Harry and Draco are going to deal with Lucius.. hehehe. Keep up the awesome work.

~~Minnie

WEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

Um, yeah.*huggles da Draco* Poor boy needs some lovin\'. Harry to he rescue, right? I seriously want to kick Luc\'s ass. Wait, does that mean I have to kick my own ass... oh yeah,ng tng that already ^_^ I feel bad for Harry though, I know how hard it is to be without one\'s corrective lenses. I\'d have a serious headache by now, were I him.

Hehe, takin\' it to the bedroom...

On a side note.... teach him to ride your broomstick? How cliche can you be? Honestly, Fariy Boy, can\'t you do better than that? *winks*

Well, that was a short but VERY good chapter. Draco\'s Harry Potter...
how cute. I would love to \"see\" Harry and Draco have a nice long love-
making session where draco\'s spooned behind Harry in bed. But I\'m not
sure if that would be a good first time position. First time would probably
be better if Draco could look in Harry eyes.

Poor Draco. Being punished as a 4 year old for hugging his father in public.
I want Harry to kick Lucius\' arse! Can\'t wait for more. I hope your muse gets
it\'s act together ao we can have another chapter soon.

If you need someone to \"bounce\" ideas off of email me. I\'d be glad to help.

Dude. This frn\' n\' ROCKED! There had better be more, as fast as you can type it, I wanna read it! Er...Please?

What an interesting and ;ovely tale so far!! I so very much like. Please write more?

Excellent chapter, I love this fic, it\'s going to be interesting to see where it goes from here now that Harry knows what\'s going on!!

~~MInnie