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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! that chapter was amazing! its like how great are you. I so wish I could write a your calaber.well please update soon. *leads pets Legolas and Draco off to play with pet Harry*
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. The chapter was very good but a little short. Looking forward to longer chapters real soon. Love the Harry/Draco bits. Looking for more. Thanks for sharing.
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m liking this, though I do prefer a more evil Draco. But it\'s nice. So, if you\'re writing chapter 8, where\'s chapters 6 and 7? Are they going to be here or are they somewhere else?
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story! I love it so far. I love how you\'ve characterized everyone, and the plot is really good. Heh...I love
Slave!Harry and Sweet!Draco too, and the fact that they\'re both in this fic . . .*melts into puddle of happy goo* Heh...anyways... I\'m dying to see what\'s going to happen. Update soon! Please? If you don\'t, I\'ll send a bunch of flying monkeys to hunt you down . . .and beware, they\'ll eat your furniture! Anyhoo, awesome work. Write more soon! I\'m out like disco suits and mullet cuts!
Slave!Harry and Sweet!Draco too, and the fact that they\'re both in this fic . . .*melts into puddle of happy goo* Heh...anyways... I\'m dying to see what\'s going to happen. Update soon! Please? If you don\'t, I\'ll send a bunch of flying monkeys to hunt you down . . .and beware, they\'ll eat your furniture! Anyhoo, awesome work. Write more soon! I\'m out like disco suits and mullet cuts!
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December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, this story is most interesting. Very interesting indeed.... It is very nice and all, but your characterizations are a bit hazy. Mayou you could try and help us delve into their thoughts? We only see from Harry\'s POV and once from Draco\'s. But when we are in Draco\'s we don\'t get any of his emotions. Though it is refreshing how he is the character we seem to have the best idea about.
But also, what happened to everyone else? Ron, Hermione, Sirius (if this is non-canon of course), Remus, and everybody else? Really, I can\'t wait to read more on this, so please update!
~Hiriyou
(Hiryuu on adultfanfiction.net)
But also, what happened to everyone else? Ron, Hermione, Sirius (if this is non-canon of course), Remus, and everybody else? Really, I can\'t wait to read more on this, so please update!
~Hiriyou
(Hiryuu on adultfanfiction.net)
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I really liked your explanation for why Draco is actually a nice person. It\'s better then the alternative, which is him falling magically in love with Harry for no reason....though there are some good stories with that as the plot. Please update soon.
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December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooooooooohhhhh!!!!!!!! *Puddel* Harry! is so cute!!! And Draco is so sweet!!!
With intrigues abounding you have to present the next chapter soon, *please*!
With intrigues abounding you have to present the next chapter soon, *please*!
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
heyo! *wa
wonderful chapter, again! gods, is there except lucius anybody who doesn\'t know about draco\'s \'harry\'? *giggles* this is so sweet! *sighs*
peace and bye till the next chapter! *waves* Ralna Malfoy
wonderful chapter, again! gods, is there except lucius anybody who doesn\'t know about draco\'s \'harry\'? *giggles* this is so sweet! *sighs*
peace and bye till the next chapter! *waves* Ralna Malfoy
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December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, despite the title, this is really ... cute! So far anyway. I love you\'re writing style. It makes me ... I don\'t know ... NOT want to skip every few sentences. Just a few spelling mistakes to complain about, but that\'s it. Story is really good so far! When are you gonna finish it?!!
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December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wonderful, interesting,can\"t wait for next chap have read first 4 like devlepment of draco