rate_review Reviews

WOW!!This is so great!!
One of the best i have read on here...hopefully you will post more??

*jaw drops steadily*

Oh......... my........ Damn Hermione is lucky. :D

It\'s very interesting. I didn\'t think Draco would want her to stay, but the explaination in the third chapter makes it okay. It sounds like Draco\'s going to have a hard time convincing her to stay with him for more than a night if she totally loves Justin. Should she still love Justin if he\'s sharing her for the night? I don\'t think she should, but when you love someone, you can\'t just stop. You can hate them (Isn\'t hate just another form of love?), but you can\'t just stop.

Omg... Omg... UPDATE!

You need an editor.

You have both grammar/punctuation and spelling errors that could have been avoided if you reread your work more often.

You need someone to help you out with whatever writing style your trying to develop for yourself but whatever your doing its not including details. You need details bet better setting and plot devices and more than a paragraph posted then call it a chapter.

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Where is chapter 6? I thought it\'s here? I need the \'Unedited\' version NOW! hehe...

This story is good. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.

I want more. This is quite interesting. I always like betting fanfics. Put more up soon!