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PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! :\'-(

I\'M ON THE EDGE OF MY SEET! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I must say this is truly an engaging and entertaining story you have created. There\'s nothing like good old-fashioned angst to bring out the complexities and flaws of the human heart. Of all the HG/SS stories I\'ve been scanning over the past few months, this is one of the best. I look forward to more updates. :-)

That was really great! I love the way you have them thinking in between so little dialoge. Some writers have lots of dramatic dialoge and we never get to know what the charicters are thinking. evereverus needs to explain himself quick. He just needs to tell Hermione why he has been such an ass. I can\'t wait for the next chapter and I am very happy to see an update so soon.

Chapter 13... So Nicolas seems to be figuring out a few things now... I am so very curious what will happen when they wake up?!?

I thought Severus had grown a set, but that has yet to happen:( He did deserve her outburst & she deserves the truth!!! I would like to know the the whole truth too;-)

I really do like Nicolas\' character!!! He seems to be such a caring & understanding soul!!! How much does he know about his father & Hermione, or is it all speculation on his part?

Looking forward to more, Deb >^..^<

Hehe! Thanks for taking the time to review, guys. I really appreciate all your support on this fic. It\'s a pleasure to write for your enjoyments : }
Just keep those comments coming, and I will work to update sooner. I owe much of my thanks to those who inspire me to have faith in the slow progression of Zephyr. Am working on the next chapters now and will be posting really soon.

Thank you,

Zoe

OMG! How have I missed so many chapters?! And damn this story is good! And how could you leave the last chapter in such a cliffy! AAAAAAHHHH!!! I hope you\'ve got the next chapter ready for posting!

Chapters 8 - 12... Well, it\'s 1:32 a.m. est & I just finished up to chapter 12*

Zoe, It seems that I have been suffering from MAJOR brain bubbles!!! Every time I have seen your story come up I keep thinking that I had read it, but never bothered to check to see if I had left a review... until tonight that is!!! I found that back in October I had read chapters 1-6 & then somenhow not come back to read more... I am very sorry about that!!!

So far I have re-read chapters 1-6 & am now up to 7. I was going to finish up to chapter 12 before reviewing, but you & chapter 7 deserve a review NOW!!!

I have to say that now that I know why Sevrus did what he did to Hermione I think he deserves to hurt, A LOT!!! On top of the pain he deserves to have lost all of her respect & had better go WAY ABOVE & BEYOND the call of duty to try to earn it back!!! He really did a bad thing by hurting her the way he did, for the reason he hurt her!!! She trusted him & loved him & he didn\'t even have the common sense to think that she deserved to be told the why\'s of his reasoning, shame on him!!! He had a past, not that he expected it to come back to bite him on the ass, but it was there none the less!!! He had NO RIGHT to rip Hermione apart because he couldn\'t handle the truth!!!

I think what really pisses me off at him is that he has the balls to think that she shouldn\'t still be angry at him after what he did to her.... STUPID MAN!!! Don\'t get me wrong, I want them together, but he better really come through in every way for her & NEVER give her another reason to fear he will hurt her again.... I think a bit of walking on egg shells & thin ice for a while sure wouldn\'t hurt any!!!

Sometimes I think I get a little too into a story, but that\'s only when they are REALLY GOOD ONES & this one is!!! I am off to finish up to ter ter 12, hope I can stay awake long enough!!! If not I WILL finish it tomorrow!!! Deb >^..^<

:D That\'s right...I forgot to add in the little passage that Antipodean Opaleyes feast on sheep and would migrate to Australia occasionally...that was how they were responsible for the kangaroo killings in the 70\'s...I should have credited the source of information.

My apologies folks! The infoion ion on the Antipodean Opaleye was from Dracopedia and The Goblet of Phoenix Encyclopedia. Thanks Sarah for mentioning it. I will paste this message at the end of the chapter.

Zoe